Any thoughts on this story idea?

To be honest, it needs to be changed completely. I know the whole point of your story is for it to be a parody, but seriously, the last thing that the world needs write now is another cliched story. There are so many of those already, so many that they feel like a parody already and people now read them for a laugh when they are supposed to be serious. What the world needs right now is, a novel that is completely original. Doing a parody on everything is just slack and gives the feeling that you have given up.